Monday, December 15, 2025

Evil Within - Part - 9

 The day his mother was discharged from the hospital, the house felt alive again.

The silence that once comforted him now felt warm, familiar. She moved slowly, carefully, but she was home. That was enough. He watched her settle into her chair near the window, sunlight touching her face, and for the first time in weeks, he smiled without forcing it.

“You look lighter,” she said, noticing his face.

He nodded. “I feel… better.”

And for a while, it was true.


A Fresh Start

With his mother resting safely at home, something inside him steadied. He woke up early, shaved, dressed neatly, and packed his documents with care. His sling bag felt lighter today—not because it weighed less, but because his mind did.

Before leaving, his mother stopped him.

“Go with confidence,” she said, placing her hand on his head. “Whatever happens, come back smiling.”

He did.

The interview room was quiet. Familiar. This time, he didn’t rush his answers. He spoke clearly. Calmly. He listened. He thought.

When the final interviewer smiled and said, “We’ll move ahead with you,” he felt something he hadn’t felt in a long time.

Relief.

He stepped out, leaned against the wall, and exhaled.

He had cleared it.


The Message Returns

His phone vibrated.

His heart skipped—but he didn’t panic.

UNKNOWN:
You did well today.

He froze.

No one knew about the interview.

HIM:
Who are you?

A pause.

UNKNOWN:
Someone who knows you better than you think.
Someone who doesn’t want you to fall.

He swallowed hard.

HIM:
Then why scare me?

The reply came quickly.

UNKNOWN:
Fear keeps you alert.
I helped you survive when you were weak.

He stared at the screen.

Helped?


An Unseen Ally

Over the next few days, the messages continued—but they changed.

Gentler. Timed perfectly.

Don’t forget your documents.
Take the earlier bus today.
Check on your mother before leaving.

Each time, the advice proved useful.

He hated how comforting it felt.

One night, sitting beside his mother as she watched TV, his phone buzzed again.

UNKNOWN:
She’s smiling more now.

He looked at her.

She was.


A Line Is Drawn

HIM:
Are you watching us?

Three dots appeared. Disappeared.

UNKNOWN:
No.
I’m protecting what matters to you.
Because if you break again… I grow.

His fingers trembled.

This wasn’t a friend.
But it wasn’t an enemy either.

It was something living in the space between.


Mother’s Unease

One evening, his mother looked at him carefully.

“You talk less these days,” she said. “But your eyes… they look stronger.”

He forced a smile.

She touched his cheek. “Just remember—strength doesn’t come from being alone.”

He nodded, but said nothing.

Because somewhere deep inside, he knew—

The evil within hadn’t left.

It had simply changed its face.

And now…
it was helping him succeed.

Evil within - Part 8

 Hospitals had a way of erasing time.

Days blended into nights. Meals were skipped. Sleep came in fragments—ten minutes here, twenty there. He lived on the plastic chair beside his mother’s bed, his world reduced to the rise and fall of her chest and the soft beeping of machines.

He no longer checked job portals.
He no longer prepared for interviews.

Nothing outside this room mattered.

His mother was improving slowly, the doctors said. “Stable,” they called it. But he noticed things others didn’t—how she looked at him longer than usual, how her hand searched for his even when she slept.

She knew something was wrong with him.


A Change

One evening, as rain lashed against the hospital windows, she spoke suddenly.

“You’re not the same,” she said softly.

He looked up. “I’m fine, Amma.”

She shook her head weakly. “You’re here… but your mind is somewhere else.”

He didn’t answer.

She tightened her grip on his hand. “Promise me one thing.”

“What?”

“Don’t let darkness sit inside you. Talk. Don’t keep everything buried.”

Her words hit him like a blade.

Darkness.

She had no idea how close she was to the truth.


The First Crack

That night, he stepped out to the hospital terrace for some air. The rain had stopped, leaving the floor wet and shining under dim lights.

His phone vibrated.

He didn’t jump this time. He expected it.

UNKNOWN:
She feels it too.
You think you’re protecting her.
You’re not.

His jaw tightened.

HIM:
Stop.

Three dots appeared. Disappeared. Appeared again.

UNKNOWN:
I was born the day you learned to stay silent.
I grew every time you swallowed your pain.
You named me without knowing — the evil within.

His breathing grew shallow.

This wasn’t someone watching him.

This was something that knew him.


Reality Slips

The next day, a nurse approached him.

“Sir, did you move your mother last night?”

He frowned. “No. Why?”

“She was found sitting upright at 3 a.m. She said you told her to get up.”

His stomach dropped.

“I didn’t,” he said firmly.

The nurse exchanged a glance with another staff member. “Maybe she was confused.”

But he wasn’t.

He remembered being on the terrace at 3 a.m.
He remembered his phone vibrating.


Raghav’s Warning

Raghav visited again that evening. One look at his face and Raghav stiffened.

“You’re not sleeping,” Raghav said. “Your eyes… this isn’t normal.”

“I’m fine.”

Raghav lowered his voice. “That consultant—maybe you should go back. Or someone else. This isn’t just stress anymore.”

He finally snapped.

“I said I’m fine!”

The sudden anger shocked even him.

Raghav stepped back. “That’s exactly the problem.”

They stood in silence.

Raghav spoke again, carefully. “Promise me one thing. Whatever you’re hearing… whatever you’re feeling… don’t face it alone.”

He didn’t promise.

He couldn’t.


The Whisper

Late that night, while holding his mother’s hand, he heard it.

Not a voice.

A whisper inside his head.

If she survives, you lose yourself.
If you break, I become stronger.

He squeezed his eyes shut.

This wasn’t fear anymore.
This was a battle.

And the scariest part?

The evil within didn’t want to destroy him.

It wanted to replace him.

Evil within Part 7

 The phone buzzed again that night.

He didn’t check it this time.

He sat on the edge of his bed, staring at the wall, replaying the message in his head. The words felt alive, as if someone had been watching him for a long time. The consultant’s careless dismissal still echoed in his ears.

Overreacting…

He clenched his fists.


The Call

Just before dawn, his mother collapsed in the kitchen.

The sound of the steel tumbler hitting the floor woke him up. He rushed out and found her seated on the floor, holding her chest, her face pale and breath uneven.

“Amma!” his voice cracked.

The next few hours blurred into chaos—an auto ride at an ungodly hour, hospital corridors filled with antiseptic smells, nurses moving too fast, doctors speaking in measured tones that carried hidden fear.

“She needs to be admitted,” the doctor said. “Observation at least.”

Those words landed hard.


Hospital

She lay on the bed, oxygen mask resting lightly on her face, eyes closed but peaceful. Machines beeped softly beside her. He sat in the chair near the bed, not moving, not blinking much.

This was the first time he truly felt fear—not for himself, but for the one person who anchored his world.

He took out his phone absentmindedly.

No new messages.

That scared him more.


Days Pass

He stopped attending interviews.

Stopped checking emails.

Stopped answering calls.

Everything else faded into the background.

His world narrowed down to hospital timings, medicine schedules, doctor updates, and sitting beside her bed—sometimes talking, sometimes just watching her breathe.

Friends asked questions.
Relatives advised.
Raghav visited once, then twice.

“You can’t put your life on pause,” Raghav said gently.

He looked up slowly. “I already did.”

There was no anger in his voice. Just emptiness.


Mother’s Eyes

One evening, she woke up fully alert and looked at him sitting beside her, unshaven, dark circles under his eyes.

“You didn’t go anywhere today, did you?” she asked.

He shook his head.

Her eyes softened. That same warmth. That same concern.

“You shouldn’t stop your life because of me,” she said quietly.

He forced a smile. “You are my life.”

She reached out and held his hand. Her grip was weak, but it was enough.

But inside him, something shifted.

The evil within stirred again.

Not as fear this time—but as guilt.


The Silence Returns

Late that night, when she was asleep, he stepped out into the hospital corridor. The lights flickered faintly. The place was quiet, eerie.

His phone vibrated.

This time, he looked.

UNKNOWN:
You chose her over yourself.
Good.
Now watch what it costs you.

His blood ran cold.

He scanned the corridor. Empty.

This wasn’t coincidence anymore.

He typed back for the first time.

HIM:
Who are you?

The message showed seen.

No reply.

Inside the ward, his mother stirred slightly, murmuring his name in her sleep.

He rushed back in and sat beside her, gripping her hand tightly, as if holding on to the only thing keeping him grounded.

Whatever this was…
it had waited for him to be weak.
It had waited for him to care too much.

And now, it was watching.

The evil within had found its moment.

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